His location's 'my chest' cuz he can't elevate ta my face...
It's like this soldier's obsessed...with coming in second place.
nice..nothin special..decenct opener w/ personal not bad

Ya'll are all weak, I crushed ya boy Dominator just yesterday...
Cold merked him...and now you're leaving the exact same way.
nothin special again..another personal w/good flow

I like the flames in ya sig cuz it relates ta how ya burnin down...
Cremation in effect so I'll spit an urn and drop ya in tha ground.
liked this one better..another personal..consistent so far

Ya shit's pathetic, don't recognize one name on ya win list...
Take a look at mine...now you've got a real reason ta be pissed.
first line was ok antoher personal..2nd line was kinda blah...

It's destiny for you ta end up there, you were born to lose...
Good thing ya military, cuz this loss has dressed you in blues.
decent closer..another personal..not great but not bad either...

very consistent verse born..no played concepts.nothing but
personals and a safe flow..decent wordlpay...nothing really stood out..but overall decent verse



born to kill ya culdn't force a thrill-even if ya tried to masterbate/
and i'm not suprised still, at ya age-ya'll need viagra to push up the pace/
first line was ok i guess..2nd line played seen it too many times

look up and get sprayed, cuz cut's in that flowin-mood/
ever since ya last birth-day, ya not gainin weight? ya just blowin-through/
better punch here..was fellin the wordplay more

holdin-true with that many wins and ya still got no-crew-each of ya shows wearin thin like posin-nude/
since it'll take ya a decade, to get any ass-ya'll just be growin-prude/
nice multis but the flow got lost..lines were too stretched[b]

treat ya like the houston 500, and have ya changin up fast/
like a pit-crew-can't stand to look at u-sit down i'll start arrangin a mask/
ya culdn't be hot money if ya were blazin up cash/
[b]first line decent..2nd was kinda of forced..need to be worded better..3rd was a filler not needed

your a fuckin headhunter? that occupation is pinnacle/
cuz the truth is, ya really are dominant-with how many dicks u blow/
i see the personal but it seemed forced.flow is off here too..

i dun't wanna figure it out, either way ya biography is gay/
from u'r avy, ya alredy dead-so u can call me bone-crusher today/
not feelin it truthfully...i see the personal but wasnt feelin the bone crusher concept

b2k gets this and heres why..
first of all look at his structure..you can tell right off the bat it is going to be easier to read..
cut need to shorten his lines and fix his structure...
2nd born had an even numer of lines (10) while cut had an uneven w/(13)..try to end the verse with an even number of lines it helps the flow alot..
both had personals...even though some of born werent that great to me, they were consistent and got the point across
cut yours seemed forced in some areas...
overall both had punches and personals..but borns wins the
structure,flow and wordplay...

this is my reason for voting the way i did
deal with it and please dont bitch about my decision
thanx

poll vote=born to kill



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