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Old 11-12-03, 05:04 PM   #9
Born To Kill
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Tek took every catagory worth mentioning.

Even shitty format. LOL!

Ya getting two lines and forcing them into one.

It fucks up ya rhyme scheme cuz the last words don't rhyme at all.
You rhymed them within one line.
Still comes out ok.
Seriously, I used ta do the exact same thing.
S-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d as hell and rhyme within the same line.

But I elevated.

You will too.

I can't figure out if Ex is dissing you or Tha Realist.

He mentions the name a couple of times..

Weak punches, not much wordplay and no personals came outta Ex's rhyme.

Direct your punches, use shit in his sig or his name to personalize it some.

Just try harder to insult. Pretend he's right in front of ya.

Peace
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