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Old 11-12-03, 06:08 PM   #7
Twizted Ayngel
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I liked this.. I will be honest and tell you there were one or two lines out of the whole piece that I didn't think were as descriptive, emotional, or as well written as other lines... but overall it was pretty good. I think the structure was good, the flow, in some places, could've flown better... but overall it really was good, as I said before. The topic was nice, and after you put everything together the piece was ill. Nice job, keep droppin.
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