Okay, i got to make this quick. As some hoor is coming around for tea (er, late tea). (dont take hoor the wrong way...it could mean male or female..(!?)...maybe i should stop using hoor, eh?..er..)..

You kind of depicted addiction in a shaky addicted like way. In other words the style in which you wrote pointed was raw. And along with the subject matter, really helped 'smoke up' the atmosphere of the piece.

The ending was resounding. Cleverly done.

A quite real piece. Gritty in a way. Yet the way it flowed made it unusually gritty.

..resp..