just trying a sshort bar format...let me know what u think


The worlds on my shoulders
And I cant stand the wait
An empty clip in its holster
Triggered something worse than fate
Know escape?he's drowned options
I breathe eyes salty tears
Ropey times I knot them
Strung along by fears
Shaken spears puncture thought
Riddling my fragile head
Countless battles fought
Rivers of hope bled
In stead im barren of futility
A desperado in deserts
Backlashed by humility
Sanded down since birth
Soiled dirt uniquely obscure
Happys days forgotten reign
The black clouds endure
Mundane mothers the pain
Tatooed stains cant be cleansed
And misery trades marks
Invested in hollow friends
My clicked hammer blasts
Deaths grasp fingers coldly shun
In the chamber of secrets
Im a son of a gun
Pull me to seek it and I promise to keep it…

But cowardice isn't willing
To listen to bullets witness a killing..
I still let suffering continue
Till it drains the soul from every last sinew



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Brainsurgeon
And word perfect