ok.. i wasnt feeling the first cat really... his flow was off to me.. drawn out words sometimes to fit the beat.. not enough emotion... 2nd cat.. i dont like this style of rhymers so its hard for me to do ti properly flow was cool.. i just dont like this style of delivery ..its just me maybe sop dont take it too rough... last catr.. the best on the song.. flow chopped the end of bars a little sometimes.. like..it just could of rolled into the next line smoother but other than that solid flow wise..delivery is fairly good... but could be improved .. emotion wise i didnt always feel what i shouldve in your voice.. and some times i was definitely imprsessed jus a little spotty on that somewhat.. but overall cool shizzle.. this is an ok joint.. part of the problem is its just not my flavor... keep dropping...
and ps.. thanks for the good honest feedback on my post man.. its appreciated
peace

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