not bad...ya kept the concept going pretty much the whole way through.

sum thoughtz:

When I inserted the tape, it meant I flirted with fate

I want to have risen to fame, but I envisioned the chains

^^^both these lines had great ideas but i thought the wordplay could have been better. sumthin like
'.....i must have flirted with fate'
and
'I aspired to attain fame...'
might have made em really flow.


A sudden decision was made, I wanted to speak my mind

^^^dope line...totally relate


The mic's a habit, but I feel small like a rabbit

^^^wierd...only point that kinda stuck out to me

Swirves off the only safe course like a wrongly played chord

^^^nice lyric.

ye..n the last line was a good cap to it.

keep up yo.