This took time, I know that's why you so uppin for feed bk, so....

Flow an structure on point, good concepts an use of wordplay, however vocab could be up... good read...

"To this rap game I'm dedicated/
It's coz the rest of my life is complicated/"- I can relate to dis line, feelin' it


Obstacles continue to cross my path but I keep surviving them/
Sometimes I feel ever since birth I was arriving condemned/- good opening

I liked the chorus... wit the right beat, if you audio dis dis tune would be a killah...

Uppin for feed bk on my thread 'What I think of RB (really)'