"When I inserted the tape, it meant I flirted with fate
And it played on my weak points, like a blade to my knee-joints" I found dis line rather effective, I like the use of similes in here an your good with couplets, rhyming structure on point... wordplay... well just put it this way I seen better from you , but still captures my everlasting mind by presenting me with what you wanated to say... top knox!!!

How bout some feed bk on my thread 'What I think of RB (really)'

peace!!!