..Soft Focus..
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IP:
This was a great piece, the flow sometimes was off but i found because of what you 2 talked about and how well you stayed on point made this into an excelent read. Ex..you had a great verse. the flow sometimes was hard but you set a good imagery on how you felt
LM, you also had a great verse, I wouldn't say one was better then the other cause you both showed good talent,
the chorus was okie, I liked it, coulsd have been better but it related good to a struggle and the song so it was on topic,
Great read, pz
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