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this is aight...yeah you have nice wordplay.....ok vocab..its good, but not special, it lacks that little bit that makes it special, its just a rhyme, well structered, all that...it like your rhyme is chrysler concorde, fucntial , very well built, handles well...but its not an aston martin v12, both cars, botht brand new and polished nice, both do the same thing, btu one has a lil bit extra..keep goin, ghostwrite for soemoen...
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"..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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