COM

This triple LLL aprentice is my nemesis...I'll relish it
You're married to the game... but Too Short to measure it
^^^nice opener^^^

No sedative in sight... but the elite are all asleep
Your loss to me is like Simpsons... another damn repeat
^^^lol, nice punch^^^

You're slammed off your feet... can't stand up for yourself
Change ya name all you want... ya still stuck with yaself
^^^oooooooooohhhhhh nice^^^

Tu-cent is dense... packing fudge like a shop cart
Only four percent of Fifty... and thats the scarred shot part
^^^another nice one^^^

If you were close to a window... best believe I'd push you through
Coz this fukka tried to make himself the leader of my crew
^^^not too good^^^

For leader I was selected... you defected here's the best bit
I looked at the roster... this fools leader... none elected
^^^nice multies^^^

I suspected you were contrived when I arrived at DM
My punches hit so hard... they don't see Tu... they see ten
^^^nice wordplay^^^

So don't frown just smile...keep your pride and have some fun
Coz like its the 11th
I think its fun to run down... Aisle 5 with a gun
^^^aiight^^^

Disown my son... now no longer do i even bother to give a fuck
Call me a positive influence...
Aim my gun up against Coms neck... and tell him to keep his chin up!
^^^aiight^^^

Your audios are wack shit... but Com is bound to repeat it
I even downloaded ya MP3.. just to delete it!
^^^nice^^^



ASILE

Ridin feebles dick... damn he cant help you... futures lookin gray
Then com enter the battle.. and tripped over the fuckin doorway!
^^^not bad^^^

Have this emcee crippled... ill make com give use to this walker...
Yea its true com took me to school... then i shoved him in the lockers!
^^^lol, aiight^^^

Who told you theres a win in site... please proceed to clean ur lens
I knew you was weak.. but i didnt kno u was lame enough to diss my name Tu Centz!
^^^nice^^^

Get pointers com.. 40 battles... dont u get it? im better than you
Then i left DM, so did alpha, lethargic.. and the whole heart of the crew!
^^^lol, nice^^^

Keep your hands to yourself.. face it i got this victory on lock bitch
Fuckin Gothic... just look at what ya wearin... the bitch shops at Hot Topic
^^^lol^^^

I'm deliverin painful hits.. tell the cops cuz this shits simply not legal
Evolve told com to work his ass off.. but it already belongs to feeble!
^^^wow, nice^^^

The real leaders here.. now just recognize your place and bow down
And you thought i was scary.. wait till my fuckin stomach growls!
^^^aiight^^^


Study my lines.. whatever you gotta do to get better.. even read books
And then when I glanced over at Coms verse... it gave me dirty looks!
^^^aiight^^^

opener:Com
closer:Asile 5
wordplay:Tie
structure:Com
punches:Asile 5
overall:Asile 5

com strated off hot and then got weaker, an asile 5 started off weak and then got hotter.

nice battle,
no hate y'all
peace

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