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this was lacking...not really bad, but not really good either, the rhymes and punchliens were weak, subject was played, but presented well....aight, dorp worth a quick read.....keep workin, this is a rhyem thathas potential, and u could be bette,r keeep ya head up kid
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"..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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