yeah that was cool

you did an aight job, but ur rhyme scheme...was ehh...
that doesnt matter tho...

hmm, the subject...is not too cool....sounds like shit talking, but ehh we all do it so coo...

yeah some...aight....i guess disses to people...
need some metas or similies....up ur complexity from just...rhyming...

keep at it homie, good job...
i'll edit my repy later with a better response....~1~

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