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Old 11-13-03, 02:11 PM   #14
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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opener:robo
closer:robo
wordplay:robo
structure:mista
punches:robo
overall:robo

robo owned this guy, you need to sort out yor structure and ur lines are a little stretched, jus keep elevating


honset votes would be appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91494
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