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Old 11-13-03, 03:02 PM   #14
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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opener:names
closer:tie
wordplay:Names
structure:Tie
punches:AR
overall:AR


nice battle y'all but angellic took this one, ar you need to work on your structure a lil dawg, ur lines are stretched. names u got nice wordplay, u jus need to elebate a lil nice drop both u guys, keep it up


aiight peace
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