Gurl, tell me bout it. I wrote something like this in one of my journals for my boyfriend. I trusted him completely with everything that I had. Then he dropped me by cheatin on me. I often think about suicide. Seems like it grows nearer to me as the pain increases. I have recently wondered if by chance you were my twin. Kinda korny but true. Its like you go through the same EXACT shit that I do. Believe me, I can relate to everything that you have posted. You truely touched me with this one. All of your work has, but this one got me deep in the heart. Idk how you do it, but ya did it. Idk if you go through this or not, but I sure as hell do, and its kind of scary if you dont. Like I said, it may sound korny, but believe me, its true. You never cease to amaze me with ur work, even though you havent been here for that long. Ur a natural. Theres absolutely nothing wrong with this piece in my opinon. There was a lot of emotion and believe me, you have ALL of my respect. Ur great at writing and it seems like u've been doin this for a long azz time. All I can say is that you got me gurl. Keep up the awesome work. Keep droppin. Most Respect.