.. look lemme give you a tip.. if you gunna make ya beatz on fruity loops or whatever program.. dont just use thier instruments and samples... use some of ya own.. son mosit of your beats sound pretty artificial... so ya know just work on ya sampling a lil better trust me youll like it alot better. i hope my advice helped ya man.but seeing how you constructed it. with standard samples or not you got some good notes in ya head.. so just try to find out how to sample better and there you go

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