I like the idea and the vocab used, you need to keep writtin', it's a bit lenghthy but a good read...
keep em dropin'

reminded me of this clip:_____________________________________________ ___
Your like a drug that no other can top
I don’t know why but this feeling wont stop
If I could spend more time with you
You’d become the only drug I’d do
This addiction I have is a permanent one
I’m here for you not just to have fun
I’ve now learned that my drug is free
But all that is important is, if you feel the same about me
This natural high that I have feel’s right
Why try to stop this, why bother to fight?
As long as you let me, I will never stop
Cause you are my drug that no other can top!
~2002~
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