opener:Tie
closer:Lyne
wordplay:Tie
structure:Aragorn
punches:Lyne
overall:Lyne

lyne you need to work on your strcture, aragorn if yuor wordplay was better your punches might of hit harder and you might of took this.

aiight y'all peace
no hate

and aragorn

some day, maybe?? just pm me!!

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