A bit long and your flow wasn't really great...

But I liked ya message and appreciate what ya tryin ta say.

Nice vocab, but like I said...

It was somehow structured or maybe worded in a way that, just to me, could have flowed alot better.

Cool drop over all...6.75/10

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