Short piece, odd topic but ehhhh, it was ok. .
major flaws was the flow, but more internals and multi's would solve that, tighten it up and really add you your pieces if you worked more into your pieces. Imagery was decent in this, id of like to see more character build up or plot line at the beginning, but yewah, from whats there this wasnt bad.


Shows potential.

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