It wasnt that great, nothing eye-openingly dope, but you showed signs of potential. First step - drop the whole 'bragging rights' type of verse, they are one of the most basic and played topics you'll ever drop to. Try writing a story telling or topical piece that has imagery / emotion and a plot to it, they involve a lot more effort, but if pulled off correctly are dope. You seemed to have some of the basics down, just build on them. You've got internal's in your verse, but there at a basic 1-2 syllable rhyme pattern, to make your pieces better you need to step that up to a 4-6 syllable internals and externals rhyme scheme. Wordplay was there, a lot of it un needed, but there none the less. Flow got shaky towards the center then picked up again nearer the end, it had its flaws, some easier to master than others, but the potentials there.

Build on this.

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