listening... samples sounds nice... what the hell are you doing with the beat.. ok beat comes in. you need to eq those vocals. you sound in front of the beat. try to throw a tad of reverb. flow is coo. ryme scheme is pretty bad in first verse. in the second it was ok but off at times. i kinda like ya voice. i see you bein ill soon if you keep practicin.
that pause in the second verse wasnt to good.
coo drop homie. beat is nice.