ok.. beat sounds like some old school shit, its wack.
Quality is HORRIBLE. flow aint to bad. take out that reverb. sounds like you got a shitty comp mic. are you white? you got sorta whiteboy accent. but you flow is coo. actually you got lots of potential. damn lots of niggas on here be havin potential. you need better equipment.

you need help. but with practice you should be fine. also read some tutorials on mixing. look in the audio help section i think opey was kind enough to put tutorials in there.