ok umm.
first. brings those vocals up nigga...
i cant hear shit you sayin.
flow sounds coo. voice aint developed yet.... i personally dont like hearing soft voices on tracks. but thats me.
flow seems coo.

you got a commercial ass flow... lol i see yo ass on the radio wit qtip.... lol. keep at it yungin. i see you killin niggas in like 2 years. lyrics were coo. but alot of lying on your part. im guessin you aint neva held a heat... and im guessin you aint got 22's. but that devil and sunblock lotion line was nice.

P.S. wouldnt say ill.. lol stay confident. but remember always room for improvement.
~stay up.