poems dont need to rhyme...just as long as the concept's there...and you did it using ur own style of writing.


you spoke of truth when it comes to lots of things that young minds cant grasp...sometimes the saying "you're still young...you wont understand.." is true..but regardless of the ignorance of people...you cant seem to tell whether its true or not.

"if the past is never left to settle, is future already disturbed"

^sometimes it doesnt always come out that way...sometimes the past helps the future. MIstakes that you have done and the lessons youve learned from it affect the future. Depends on Your choices and decisions.

Your piece is not bad at all.
Made me think.

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