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Old 11-14-03, 05:35 PM   #3
bouncedoggydog
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Good piece.

I tend to over analyze things by nature, in this drop I can see things two ways.

First of which, I see GOD leaving these words behind saddend by the lack of initiative among men, to seek out and ask the hard questions. I see a struggle between his willingsness to qeull the anxities of man, then again at the same time a lonleyness of being so informed and in the know. It is he and he only who knows such things, a truely lonely place or person to be...

Next I see someone trying to impress another, either with wit or intellect, but each attempt is useless since the other person is not capable of understanding or just not interested.


A decent peice, it could have been longer, maybe even elevated in complex imagery. Either way I enjoyed reading it.

Keep elevating...

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