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Old 11-14-03, 08:28 PM   #8
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sayen myn was wordy lol...juz messin...this was a hot piece, very creative it needs some work but you can keep writting i've came a long way be watchen vets an learning there structure an metas an shit, just read an write a lot and it will adventually all just come and take your time don't rush thing that makes it better an read it over like 2 3 times that helps but good drop keep it up man pz check my new peice as well it's pretty cool thanks amn
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