Thread: Another Night
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Old 11-14-03, 08:40 PM   #6
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damn, you suck lol just fucken with ya this was actually pretty good, i think you could elavate on yout structure it would help you weith your thoughts cuz u could explain more clearer, but for this it was pretty basic your feelings so it was a good emotional read an hope ye get some sleep man no more wet dreams lol pz
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