Wow. Dis is a kick ass drop. There is nothing wrong with it in my opinion. You have a lot of love and feeling into this and not too many guys can do that. I loved it. Kinda speachless on it. Not too many ppl can do dat to me with poems. You definitely got da talent. I'm looking forward very much to see the completed version of it. I'm sure that it will be 10 times as great when its finished. Great job once again. Most respect. Keep em comin.