First Verse was crap flow and structure wise, but you picked up the pace nicely in the following verses. I liked the flow in the last 2 verses and the structure was a helluva lot better cuz.

Mad skills, I dare ya bitch to ask me for it//
my style so sicc AIDS developed a vaccine for it
^^ Def a nice line.

Overall, after making it through the first verse, the read got easier. Just edit and fix the flow and syllable distribution in the first verse and you got your self a nice track. Nice drop man.

-Formula.

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