^ thanx...I like getting that kinda crit..actually makes me want to finish the poem lol....

but to the person who said they couldn't find the flow....try a little harder..cuz I wrote this to a beat...and it flows perfectly..b/c while it is a poem keep in mind it's gonna be an audio as well....but neway thanx for the replies

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