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0H W0W! My babi dropped something that was HAPPY!  I love it.. but yeah, onto the crit..
The flow.. was DEFINITELY there. Maybe its because I know you well enough to know how you write, to understand the way you do it.. but the flow was sicc. You used nice vocabulary. The choice of words was right on in every line of this piece. Can't wait to see the finished piece babi..
Nice drop. Much love..  
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