grasp tha cleaver/ cut a beaver in a million chunks/
wanna make me a believa/ write much more than stunts/
you bore me punk/ you style has got enormous fronts/
it's corny son/ you couldn't write a warning pun/
your structure's whack/ who taught you how to bust a rap/
you couldn't figure out a bar/ if hershey made your track/
so learn...get back/ I'll leave standin nervous jack/
don't wanna see me less you bringing me dessert wit that....

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