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Old 11-15-03, 01:12 AM   #5
junio sixnine
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 436
From: Boston
IP:

that was pathetic, your wack, un-poetic
^that verse needs serious structure, and flow edits
im in bed-wit-ur-wife, getting head-from-a-dike...we used whipped cream and eggs...
cuz it was a recipe easy to spread-wit-a-knife... like your moms legs
im hectic, scank, and you know what im getting at...
your verse was not only shit, but the whole septic tank
family leave-you-in-hospitals, your a geek raised by imposters
cuz your daddy fucked you so deep, his dick squeeze-through-your-nostrils
give me any weapon, gats, knives, or glass
shit, give me "whipped" cream and i could still "whip" your ass
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