1liner - yo man...ya structure n flow needs more consistency. also, unless the hits have sum kind of relevance to each other people r going to keep merkin ya.

ex:
i'll leave you TWICHIN __WISHIN someone would VISIT- this was a great line but what does it have to do wit:
its a murderrap other RHYMES UNTOLD

keep elevatin

explicit - not too much heat but flow, structure, n everything else was nice

the u couldn't beat me wit a 100 was a nice personal.

if i could vote it'd be explicit