Tag got this cuz=
Punches-tag
structure-yay
word-tag
vocab-yay
flow-tag
Wined.-TAG

i liked your rhymes tag a little basic but ur on the right track
change that structure cuz it aint ez readin.
besides some idiots vote solely on structure and dont read verses

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91971
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91135
^hit up these please.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.