this was a nice yet total peice right here... seems like its good n ready to be spat n rec over a beat n shit.. lyrics were nice for the most part... the hook was missin something.. not quite sure what it was but it didnt take from the track though.. put it 2 a beat yo.1

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//