I think the only reason she said the rhyme scheme was off is because it looked like there was a rhyme scheme to it. To begin, it was like.. last word rhyme. But then you got to some parts where the last word didnt rhyme, and then other parts where it did. Thats how she CAN say the rhyme scheme was off. But the flow was right on so whatever rhyme scheme she saw to the poem really doesnt matter. LoL. I think this was a nice ass piece. Nice drop.

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