The opening line caught my attention. Because it was so vague that it made you wonder "well what is she surrendering? Sex, love, power, her heart, her body?" But I didn't think you were going to take it in the direction that you did, I'm impressed. That's talent to take the reader somewhere you didn't think they would go.
On another level I think mainly all women with a dating history can relate to an abusive boyfriend. Whether or not you're writing this from your perspective or some one you know or just the thought of... No woman deserves to be beaten on. PERIOD. IF you are in a relationship like that concider all that he is (write it down if it helps you) his pros and cons. See what outweighs what. And know that NO ONE will stop anything until they feel it with in them to stop. If you ever need to talk hit me up on aim Phantasma4357 or PickledPixxyStix... peace gurl, nice emotional drop