This was an odd poem... not that it wasn't good. It was just a bit off center to me. I liked it because of that fact. It wasn't a love poem, a "where has my life gone" peice. It was simple, this is what's happening in a beautifully illustrated picture! You did seem to switch emotions within this... the "insignificant" got me. And this whole thing made me think of the opening scene of "Son In Law" Dunno if you've seen it, but graduation thing just got me. Seemed like this was written from a valadictorian's point of veiw as well the "night before my speach is due and I have to write it all now" type thing. Smell me? Nice drop, peace