yo, i'm-a drop some more feedback on this 'cause u gave me a way better critique than what i said...

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And it starts..... the intro's funny still, the first couple lines sick, nice multi's an' punches mixed... you do got a really smooth flow, 'cept it's choppy at places, but even when it's choppy it on beat... i'm feelin' the punches on tha real, you rippin' this kid... shit.. is it MOF you battlin' shit, man... you could've come 1/2 as hard as this an' merked him... god damn, this has to be one the best disses i heard in a long time... ooo shit, ruthless punches... DAMN, "this battles a bigger joke than a german rappin"... shit dawg u fuckin' him up... this isn't even funny ne-more, it's jus' sad.. lol

yo, nice shit... 1...

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