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Good drop. Everything was great on it. You got ur point across and ur feelings as well. Vocab and wording were all good. A few parts i got confused on, but I understand the central view of it.
i would assume life is like death leaving your darkened state to walk into the light
^sometimes I think that as well. However, your darkened state is also part of your life. So maybe my view of it is a little different.
Overall, I liked it. You did a good job. Keep it up. Much respect.
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