intro to long.... beat is ok.
ooh. lay off the sound effects on the first guy.. sounds like he using a laptec. its all muffled and shit. i see he gotta develop his flow... thats a hard flow to get mastered but its sick as fuck when you do... ok. them gunshots dont do any justice. mentill you got nice flow. your vocals are too low... quality is what is really killin you. thats like most the problem on this site. your lyrics/flow is tight.
plus the first verse is higher then the chorus. yall just gotta eq better. ill put up a tutorial on eq.