I liked the use of words and the rhyme was tight but I couldn't follow the lines.... I ignite like incense of infants, incredibly insane and instantaneous//
Jesters jingle jangle best, jokers jump on the jurrassic jive//
Kinetic keepsakes of kamikazes killed with knapsack knives//

i would love to hear some of this shit on audio tho, to hear what it sounds like, im sure it's hot...
try to use other topics when u write your rhymes, and don't use too many words that sound alot alike....