Fuck, people are sleeping on this like it was a mattress.

Anyway, you're peice was great. It was a solid look into the veiw of a person trying to make it, and can't. Especially in regards to the fact that it seems like you're trying to make it in the music business above anything else.

A few rhymes seemed off, and more then just one word was misspelled. But it was nothing that detracted from the main purpose and vision of this peice. It was very good all the way around.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.