mof
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yo explict 0:2 fag u get smacked on the floor and i'll jump on yo back
i dont need a lota lines 2 battle u, ima hunt u wit verses till u flag
^this was ok-i'm sure it would sound better in audio
the first line dont flow with second one
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yo shits wack, sorry for beein so honest but ur rhymes just do lag
i got hot verses made 2 burn down yo shak, i heat the floor cuz i expect
^again with using verses, i got hot then use something else.
im sure its sounds better if mof had it n audio
lines 2 & 3 flow, put the bars together, then have something that flows with back n the same bar. these 2 bars dont flow
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fuck this shit it takes to long to explain line by line
mof yer shit was ok, its sounds better in audio
yer lines just didnt flow, they were all out of place
at the end some were flowing, but lacked creativity
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i'll break down the other fools verse, then vote