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Old 11-15-03, 06:15 PM   #7
Twizted Ayngel
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Some of the flow was off because the words didnt rhyme.. but the topic of the poem was nice, i like the wording of it.. the rhyme scheme was the only thing off. Overall nice drop though. Keep 'em comin!
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