Ahh, first thing I noticed, is how bad Sal-V already ripped this beat. . lol

Whoa, first guys flow is way off. Lyrics, from what I could tell, were pretty good, though.
Gun shots sound pretty wack.
Your verse is a lot better than the first was. Flow is good, lyrics are nice. Solid shit from you.
Third verse is better than the first was. . Flow got a little better. .